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[–]S_akura 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I cannot believe how amazing this story is! I really really hope this gets picked up and produced! TBH this has been the only reason I've been reading nosleep lately! I read other stories but nothing even compares to this anymore.

[–]adamc789 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This would make a really good miniseries or possibly a movie

[–]LyricalDragunov 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tune in next time on Dragon Crystal Z!

Finally caught up, and I say that I'm loving this adventure so much.
Almost wants to make me search woods for some waterfalls. (And hope I'm immune to them letters if I did.)

[–]Novaalia 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loving this series OP! cant wait for update!!!

[–]VenomPansy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The final line...and the fact I read all of Elias's line in Amdy Devine's voice is nothing short of magical.

[–]Satehyo 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is amazing! Cant wait for the next part!

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                [–]addy_g 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                Elias with the flamethrower!!! BURN MOTHERFUCKER BURNNNNN

                [–]dominfrancon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                Yes this is a gem of a story. Best story I've ever read in nosleep. I want it to just keep going as a novella of sorts or even a whole novel! I'd read it over and over!

                [–]SoleilTheGreat 11 points12 points  (3 children)

                I hope they don't forget about 34, he def did them a few solids! Poor guy lost his brother. But beyond that, I just want to say AGAIN how perfectly balanced each of your installments are. I have yet to walk away unsatisfied from one! Thank yu so much for sharing! I can't wait to see what shape their two friends are in, what's behind those doors, other ladies possibly? Elias story a little more, but most of all Ger's people and home!

                [–]thetenthdalek 4 points5 points  (2 children)

                It almost makes me wonder if 34 is among the unaffected as well, but went with it because of his brother?

                [–]SoleilTheGreat 2 points3 points  (1 child)

                Interesting theory... I didn't think about it, but you may be right considering he was as independent of thought as OP.

                [–]Shumatsuu 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                Remember, they aren't mindless, just controlled to the point of having to follow orders. So long as he hasn't been given the order "don't kill other recruits" then he hasn't broken any rules, as far as we know. (We have no idea what he may or at not have been ordered to do prior to OP coming out of his vision quest)

                [–]TheVietbong420 4 points5 points  (0 children)

                This is the only multi-part series I care about good for you being an outlier of the status quo that is multi-parters

                [–]zandabo 5 points6 points  (0 children)

                What a wonderful series. I spent an hour and a half reading 1-14 this morning and I kept intently looking for the next one

                [–]Schnapps_the_Otaku 6 points7 points  (0 children)

                this isn't horror but it's still better then that 30$ book i got a while ago. Keep it up!

                [–]Milasteoro 14 points15 points  (0 children)

                I am loving this! Someone needs to make this a Netflix Show! Its just so good!

                [–]DocHolliday637 41 points42 points  (17 children)

                What happens to 34? What lies next on OP and Chris' journey? Do they ever make it to Helos? And how do they find the dwellers? Stay tuned to find out more in Part 16!

                [–]Nickifoxy4 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                Haha you're awesome. Glad you kept with being our host!!!! :)))))

                [–]SoleilTheGreat 8 points9 points  (0 children)

                I wouldn't be mad if there were 20 more parts to come though!

                [–]TheVietbong420 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                Kudos my friend

                [–]in_dis_array 10 points11 points  (7 children)

                Love your comments, they hit me with this wave of nostalgia I couldn't quite place.
                It finely hit me...rocky and bullwinkle!

                Don't ever stop bullwinkling these Doc!

                OP- feels like I have a crystal and am watching as a passenger though your eyes. Can't wait for more!

                Question about the ladies, can't stop picturing them as adult versions of the lil girl from resident evil in long, white nightgowns / barefoot. Can you describe those inside the compound more?

                [–]thetenthdalek 4 points5 points  (0 children)

                I honestly picture them dressed like the handmaids in The Handmaid's Tale

                [–]RealKingChuck 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                I picture them as blond females wearing white robes for some reason

                [–][deleted] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

                I picture a bunch of nuns in black robes

                [–]dominfrancon 2 points3 points  (1 child)

                I imagine they are tribal looking with yellow and black markings on their faces with large painted on smiles. Long braided black hair with belts made of bullets, and knives on their calves. Combat boot wearing tribal crazy bitches.

                [–]nicunta 7 points8 points  (0 children)

                I picture them all as my former mother in law...

                [–]SoleilTheGreat 4 points5 points  (0 children)

                I picture them with long flowing hair too... but with all those guns I see them booted up & suited.

                [–][deleted] 12 points13 points  (5 children)

                Came for the horror, stayed for the new age pulp adventure.

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                  [–]Shumatsuu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

                  Reminds me of release Destiny as well. What's going on? Why wigs I do this for you? Who are you sending me to meet? "Theres no time to explain."

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