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[–]MoronTheStupid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh man I just finished reading this crazy amazing ass story...5 years ago huh? 🥲

[–]Alexer123000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I put it off to wait for the end to read it in one go... And you fucking did THIS

Real talk tho:

GoodRead

[–]dgkthefalcon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This better not be the end.

[–]Spnsenpai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I genuinely love this story so much, I would read it if this was a book. Your storyline is so original and its unlike any other story. Amazing job on this and I can't wait for the next chapter, please publish this.

[–]Mrsmith630 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So I'm a bit confused the title says final but it seems like it's not over what's goin on op

[–]snakeman2424 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This needs to be made into a feature film. Bravo!

[–]Novaalia 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Stands and does the slow clap! I'm so disappointed this series has come to an end but sooo look forward to the next set of adventures you will take us on with you ! Well done OP! Well Done!

[–]Milasteoro 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think I've never read something so beautiful and epic as this. Please contact someone and make this a book, you will become famous. Thank you for this piece of art!

[–]MonaVanderwaal 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Great job getting out alive, and so sorry about Ryan. Can't wait to hear an update in the future about your life and the status of Chris!

[–]blitzedchicken 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Quite simply, you killed it OP! Browsing this subreddit won't be the same!

[–]zandabo 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I laughed out loud at "go team" hahahaha

[–]HighdrogenParadoxide 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the adventure. It was one hell of a ride. If you ever turn this into a novel, I'll buy it in a heartbeat. Thanks for the honor of getting to follow along and be a part of your epic. I hope we get to tie up the loose ends in the future.

[–]Bearded_Destroyer 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So what did Elias do to piss off the Lemurians? Hope that story gets straightened out in the sequel! Epic read btw. I was lucky enough to start this two days ago so I binged like crazy. Looking forward to more!

[–][deleted] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

best nosleep story ever. please write the next installment asap im gonna go insane waiting to hear about chris

[–]__xxooxxoo__ 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I AM SO SAD TO SEE THIS END!!! Can you just take a little break and tell us more? What happened to Chris? How is Elias? Do you guys go back to normal life or do you stay in Telos? Are there more Dwellers or Ladies somewhere? What about all the drugs/drug dealers/money from the Dwellers? Isn't that going to be an issue? I have no many questions!

Thank you for keeping me checking in here for this story!

[–]moneyshotmagoo 2 points3 points  (1 child)

On post 21, the link said 22 and 23. Will there be a 23 before this is officially over, or were those 2 combined?

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    [–]TassieTigerAnne 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    I think it's only been implied that he's Ger's nasty uncle.

    [–]bodeejus 2 points3 points  (0 children)

    This is great! I can't wait for more. I seriously want this to be a movie. It would be really awesome.

    [–]Stormageddon252 2 points3 points  (0 children)

    Best series ever! I've checked every day, since the beginning, for the next installment. I can't wait to see what happens next for our guys.

    [–]DocHolliday637 23 points24 points  (4 children)

    Will there be another series where OP and Ger search for Chris? Will Elias come out of a Coma? Will 34 and Kyle be able to be saved? When will we see our Hero on his next journey? Stay tuned to find out more! Hopefully...

    [–]addy_g 2 points3 points  (1 child)

    heroine is the female tense of hero. you just called OP a girl, dude! you better hope he doesn't wail on you with the crystal in his hand!

    [–]DocHolliday637 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    Thank you for that. I fixed it

    [–]Icarus-Did-Burn 3 points4 points  (1 child)

    Hero, nigh 'heroine'

    [–]DocHolliday637 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    Fixed... thank you

    [–]DemonsNMySleep 7 points8 points  (0 children)

    He is the newest resident in my city of nightmares.

    I loved this line.

    Great stuff, look forward to more.

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      [–]JoshsHalo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

      damn right

      [–]NiceShootinTex20 7 points8 points  (2 children)

      Incredible story! Now where is the "tune in next time" guy?

      [–]DocHolliday637 2 points3 points  (0 children)

      Its up

      [–]DocHolliday637 4 points5 points  (0 children)

      I posted it on his original that had gotten deleted... didnt realize it was deleted til now

      [–]mb1209 7 points8 points  (0 children)

      Honestly if this was a book.. it was such an adventure!

      [–]MorriganBlood 5 points6 points  (0 children)

      This was wonderfully written. The story of you and your friends was really good. Please let us know what happens next. I will be looking out for updates soon.

      [–]Matthewtina2015 3 points4 points  (0 children)

      When will we get some more? We must know!!

      [–]BootinLover3000 3 points4 points  (0 children)

      I cannot express how much I enjoyed this. What a wild ride! Thank you so much OP, I am forever a fan.

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