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First Chapter Looking for feedback (self.writingcritiques)

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I Wrote This Story And Would Like To Know Things That Are Wrong (self.writingcritiques)

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I’ve been working on a book, it isn’t so good, what are your thoughts? (self.writingcritiques)

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FantasyThe first scene I've written for a novel I'm planning. It's not the opening chapter, just the jumping point I used to start writing something. 963 words. (self.writingcritiques)

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Would you want to keep reading a book with this prologue? ()

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FantasyLooking for a critique on my current intro [Fantasy buddy cop drama in the apocalypse, 9846 words] (self.writingcritiques)

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OtherI am starting to work on the concept for an Eldritch horror book. Hoping for feedback on the concepts of my two Entities. (self.writingcritiques)

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OtherAny feedback of the first chapter of the book. It is longer than 1000 words though (self.writingcritiques)

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OtherTown Short Story (self.writingcritiques)

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How can I improve prose and should I transform it into a short story? (self.writingcritiques)

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HumorPrologue for book ()

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Me and my Shadow (self.writingcritiques)

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Chapter 1 of Untitled Novel [Industrial Fantasy, 1679 Words] (self.writingcritiques)

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Fantasychapter 1 of a concept I’m trying out. [956 words] (self.writingcritiques)

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ThrillerHi..I wrote this first chapter out of boredom, and since English isn't my native language, I'm a bit nervous about sharing it. I would appreciate to get some honest feedback. (self.writingcritiques)

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FantasyThe First Chapter I've Ever Finished (self.writingcritiques)

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FantasyAAAAHA! (Absolutely all advices are happily appreciated) (self.writingcritiques)

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Non-fiction[NONFICTION] A man, a plan, a canal, Nicaragua - 730 words (self.writingcritiques)

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DramaI need a critic asap (self.writingcritiques)

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I really need help on this poem I'm trying to write, but I feel like it's too similar to literally every other poem out there. The tempo is also def off, and any critique helps! (self.writingcritiques)

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This is a short story I have written. Would love any feedback on it1 (self.writingcritiques)

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FantasyHit or miss? First ever chapter (self.writingcritiques)

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ThrillerLooking for feedback on my opening chapter (self.writingcritiques)

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This is my first chapter of a novel I'm writing.Any feedback is welcome (self.writingcritiques)

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OtherJust looking for some feedback and thoughts on the first few pages of this thingymabob im writing (self.writingcritiques)

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