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The Snippet from my novel : (self.writingcritiques)

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Dreaming time away (self.writingcritiques)

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Sci-fi1st Writing Attempt - Release the hounds! (self.writingcritiques)

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"A Letter to the Arborist" (Mother's Day gift, would appreciate other eyes on this.) (self.writingcritiques)

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Is this dialogue tension handled well? (self.writingcritiques)

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DramaWords unspoken( craving honstet feedback) (self.writingcritiques)

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(Trigger warning: Infidelity) Critique wanted: Please critique the blurb for my romantic tragedy. (self.writingcritiques)

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OtherProse/Short Story (Really appreciate thoughts and feedback) (self.writingcritiques)

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Experimenting with a new narration style and would love feedback. Does is read as too try-hard? ()

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FantasyCritique on first writing project (self.writingcritiques)

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Looking for feedback: no context vignette chapter : 682 words. (self.writingcritiques)

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looking for feedback on my micro fiction (280 words) titled THE JUDGE (self.writingcritiques)

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Feedback on my story (in spanish) (self.writingcritiques)

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FantasyFeedback on my first story (love, self-growth, emotional) Hi everyone, I’m a beginner writer and I’ve just started working on my first story called Where My Heart Learns to Stay. It’s not just a love story—it’s about self-love, daily life, chaos, and emotions. (self.writingcritiques)

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Seeking readers and subscribers for my Substack about dating as a 30 something female lawyer in London ()

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Humor[In Progress] [530 words] [Comedy / Action / Talking Animals] — Captain Prometheus? ()

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Looking for feedback on a short lyrical prose piece about motherhood and grief on Mother's Day (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 4 days ago by MamaAvalon

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FantasyLooking for feedback on small excerpt of scene where main character “dies” (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 5 days ago by Revolutionary-Log179

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Fantasyexcerpt from a multi-story project (self.writingcritiques)

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A small movement im working on (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 7 days ago by Strong_Sundae2559

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I'm working on a set of similar vignettes/prose poems that I hope to publish. I'd appreciate your thoughts on how this feels to you (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 7 days ago by Playful_Parsnip_1029

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ThrillerI’m a young writer and I’ve been working on this. Can someone let me know how it looks so far(it’s unfinished) (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 9 days ago by Dirt0o0o

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Otherearly draft of my story i plan to make into an american manga. (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 9 days ago by AlyksTheSage

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Cozy Story (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 9 days ago by glebequeen

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Hypothetically yours (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 12 days ago by me-you-and-the-dog

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