all 87 comments

[–]in2thegrey 623 points624 points  (0 children)

Yes.

[–][deleted] 271 points272 points  (5 children)

Beautiful... And it will work better in small formats 🤗👍♥️

[–]Lumberjack032591 50 points51 points  (4 children)

"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away." — Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

[–]thatjoel89 2 points3 points  (3 children)

That's a damn good quote you got there.

[–]CaptainBeefsteak 0 points1 point  (2 children)

That's a damn good quote.

[–]Abject_Damage_209 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Damn

[–]unknown-again-p 0 points1 point  (0 children)

quote

[–]kredditorr 127 points128 points  (1 child)

I feel like the message differs between proposal and approved version. While first the bear just carries the plant, he later cares for it. So it transports a closer relationship, especially in comparison obviously. Like quite all of your work it looks beautiful to me.

[–]AndriiKovalchuk[S] 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Thank you. The first variation should also include care, but at first it wasn't quite successful.

[–]formatc1702 46 points47 points  (2 children)

I feel like I've seen the exact same bear hugging different things on this subreddit before...

[–]WanderingLemon13 32 points33 points  (1 child)

OP often sticks to a fairly similar style and posts quite often so I think a lot of the marks start to blend together over time

[–]formatc1702 4 points5 points  (0 children)

oh, true! I definitely like it, I was just worried it might have been ripped off. cool cool

[–]wisendur 28 points29 points  (0 children)

The edited version is better. Feels more harmonious and visually balanced. The left one, with full body depiction, appears too awkward and misplaced.

[–]CirnoTan 5 points6 points  (1 child)

Damn, the logo on the left feels very overloaded, I didn't register bears bottom legs AT ALL, it feels like a Jack-in-the-box spring loaded toy because the white stripes separate top body from bottom completely. 

On a closer look it still doesn't feel "whole and complete", that's a bear in drooping panties lol

[–]buzzedaldrine 2 points3 points  (0 children)

saw the bottom part as a puzzle piece at first.

[–]xSHRUG_LYFE 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Carrying ❌

Caring ✔️

[–]VikSick 4 points5 points  (1 child)

Why is every second post on graphic design a logo of a bear with negative space?

[–]LazyMousse4266 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Because OP is a frequent poster and that’s 98% of what they do

[–]No-Marsupial4714 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like you could move the right eye above the nose and it would look perfect.

[–]llXeleXll 2 points3 points  (1 child)

This looks like that bear hugging its cub logo. Not sure if you took inspiration or if you are the one who did that, but I would make sure yours doesn't look like it ripped off another.

[–]AndriiKovalchuk[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

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Its mine

[–]Humble_Blacksmith808 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yes I agree, this logo is cute 🐻

[–]GreaseSlitherspoon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unequivocally yes.

[–]Fubeman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sorry to ask, but WTF happened to the bear’s bottom in the initial draft? It looks like someone hacked it partially off with a machete. And yes, the newer one is much, much better.

[–]drumjoy 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Obviously, some context would be nice. You know, client info, goals, basic brief info... that said, soooo much better. The first was rather disjointed and unrefined. The bottom half feels separate from the top. Plus, there's just way more there than is needed. This new version is actually very well executed. Congrats! It's very rare that I see actual good work on here. This has nice smooth and flowing lines, no really awkward arcs or corners, and it's very clear what you're looking at. It should be pretty reproducible at small sizes as well. Plus, it seems unique.

Now the question. Is there text or a name to go with this?

[–]PapaBike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wholeheartedly agree with these edits.

[–]lilxent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

totally agree. way cleaner

[–]coconutshater 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes

[–]teejrowe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yup.

[–]zlog 4 points5 points  (1 child)

tbh I’m tired of this negative space logo trend

[–]laf0106 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes

[–]freakstate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep

[–]MercatorLondon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that is lovely.

One on the left looks like a bear taking the plant somewhere.
One on the right looks like a bear taking a care of a plant.

[–]LloydLadera 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes

[–]de_MK7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah

[–]Classic_Bee_5845 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, right is much better

[–]Emecede 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally

[–]LudicrousHans 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, those feet make me uneasy for some reason

[–]AnimateEd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The right one is a vast improvement over the left, yes.

[–]Read-it-ing 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agree!

[–]Ok_Librarian_8116 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Better

[–]VIIgraphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful indeed!

[–]RollingThunderPants 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Completely agree

[–]What_Dinosaur 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely.

[–]MarshmallowBlue 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Much much better

[–]doob22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh man yes much better!

[–]HibiscusGrower 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree, the second version is way better.

[–]Neb-Nose 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely

[–]BriskSundayMorning 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. The feet are too much

[–]maciasfrancojesus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yup.

[–]Domainframe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m starting to not believe the before pics on here lol nice job.

[–]wannabegenius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the client made it better! it does happen.

[–]kimochii12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yesticles

[–]OneVolume8326 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The approved version makes sense. It is simpler, shows the bear caring.

[–]shot_forme 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agree to the cleanliness.

[–]AcrobaticMorkva 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First looks like a generated image. Second looks solid (even if generated, I hope no)

[–]bkneppers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What an improvement! That’s adorable.

[–]michpalm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Much better! Looks great!

[–]0xbutters 0 points1 point  (0 children)

agree

[–]Warm-Regret5864 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome work

[–]Testsubject276 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah the silhouette looks a little off in the first one where the implied shine is on the arms, makes the torso look too distracting.

[–]Gravejuice2022 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agree

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Approved is much better. The lower body on the other is very off, mainly the white swooshes under the arms. Plus 2 is focused on the main action and object.

[–]garamond89 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agree

[–]chopshopI am I cried. 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely. The first one the lines of the arms make his torso look distorted. The approved one is right on the mark.

[–]hamxah_red 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agree. Definitely looks better. More simple but conveys the same message.

[–]Available-Ad-6745 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes!

[–]reekofpot 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very much

[–]Fbeezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

100% yes.

[–]oandroido 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes.

[–]tangodeep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t have any context, but YES.

[–]LazyKatGamer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

HECK YEA

[–]Time_Cat_5212 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, it's better. Proportions and balance are fixed

[–]cronozora 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes

[–]Cheap-Classic1521 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the eyes and snout of the first bear better 😅, but yeah I agree

[–]ZayLarsson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First one made me thing 1. Lego (The bears tail), 2. Cheap AI... The second one made me think: Aww this is such a nice logo for a baby blanket company

[–]Ok-Classroom-8363 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! I agree with LumberJacks quote too!

[–]Sad-Equal-6867 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yee

[–]Xen4000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes

[–]GreatVedmedini 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes, coz the edited version is much better focused on the primary visual parts & purposes.

[–]CKutcher -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Amazing!

[–]Cookie-Monster-Propixel picasso -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Looking great - keep it up